Just finished Dive into Temptation!! Your writing is so so so well done, I'm just in complete awe. And don't get me started on the pacing of everything, omgggggg.
It's rare to come across masterpieces like this on Wattpad. This story had me INVESTED. One minute I'm smiling giggling, kicking my feet at Adam and Ryan's dynamic in the beginning and then the next I'm heavily disturbed by Dom's behavior, frustrated by Lily's obliviousness, and deeply aching for Adam the whole damn time. I'm not tryna spoil nothing for nobody but the turmoil and change in Adam was so gut-wrenching to read, I was nauseous at points from stress. But at the same time, you can't help but understand everything he does/his behavior (Adam only, of course).
I just had to come here and make a comment on your page because it's been a while since a story has lured me in, chewed me up, spit me back out, and then gave me a lollipop at the end of it all. It's an emotional rollercoaster. So thank you, and I will look forward to anything you decide to publish for years to come (I'm already on that AO3 story as we speak lol).
Bravo!!!
(P.s. I apologize for the long comment, I treat these message boards like Goodreads reviews)
