GritsnGravyKCM
Jitterbug by Wham or Touch the Sky by Kanye West?
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Why does this app never fucking work?
MannyTheManticore
@GritsnGravyKCM good to know, hope things let up on your end, I really enjoy your work.
MannyTheManticore
@GritsnGravyKCM you good man? Been awhile since you posted anything just thought I'd check.
GritsnGravyKCM
Couple quick questions for the people who've read and followed me.
Does the insert character have too much detail for an actual insert? And does it ruin the pace and immersion because of it?
Is there any specific gripes about the story itself or any of the characters? Am I putting too much or too little thought behind certain aspects that seem unnecessary?
And finally, and I'm curious because not even I know why I did it if I'm honest... does Issei being a female do anything for the story itself? I think it'd be way too late to change it, but I feel at times as if I had made an unnecessary change to the original material.
Please let me know, this would me alot in the long run. I do enjoy criticism.
LtRedScorpion
@GritsnGravyKCM depends wat you mean by insert male reader insert? or an OC insert. Imo starting as one and going to the other would cause more stress on you as the writer. If for example your go for a male reader insert you want to add more info about the character as thats who the reader is, spacing out the info is also helpful for story building. Ocs are a different thing entirely which i tend to try and avoid due to how problematic they can be for me so i wont give my take on that. My only gripe is u seem to doubt your abilities quite often, but considering how many people have read your story should show that people enjoy your writing. Id recommended sitting down and just think about wat you truly wish for your story. Do you want people to feel like they ARE the character? or do you want them to want to see the character succeed and the journey they take. Personally i dont think female issei really changes that much is a nice spin on DXD as a whole as its not done often and you seem to of taken a leap of faith which from what i remember reading was very well done.
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I have to rewrite this gay shit. Announcement too long supposedly. I'm just gonna make it in points
• Story is unpublished completely. No I'm not quitting just taking time to revise it completely before continuing to write shit that don't make sense.
I don't even write this announcement anymore. Fucking hate this bullshit ass app. Deleted my first announcement.
• Got a career and blah blah blah, body hurts and brain is too retarded to wanna dedicate my free time to writing all the time. Just wanna fix it, and perhaps make a change with the character. Tired of calling him Y/N with the amount of detail he has. What do y'all think?
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https://youtube.com/shorts/v1VbpDK88Vw?feature=share I meant 'bout that...
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https://youtube.com/shorts/gEl7ssRMdR4?feature=share Got Covid no bullshit. That's all imma say "bout that.
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False alarm I hit the button my accident
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Chapter 18 is up. Had to unpublish for a but that's my bad.
GritsnGravyKCM
Would y'all be fine with me posting a chapter that's already finished while skipping one that was deleted for a rewrite? Cause I have one that's ready for publishing but I'm tired of making y'all wait for some stupid rewrite.
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Alright how do you write a good fight scene I'm struggling here.
GritsnGravyKCM
@BiG_nola That's exactly what I mean. But I think Connor gave me a good idea as well. To be honest I've been lagging like crazy but I've had all these ideas for the story and I haven't been able to implement them until this weekend. Speaking of which I got a question. Need a story project car. I picked either a Hellcat Challenger or a Demon. What you think?