AmbarAnak

Gross, i had good news, your book on my reading list and i heard you make conversation with Colonel earlier, right?

GrossDeutschland1935

@AmbarAnak I have an idea for another story but I am not working on it now. I will finish this one first. 
            Thanks for the offer.
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AmbarAnak

@GrossDeutschland1935 You welcome but hey if you need future new story ideas, you can use my collection i collect so far almost a year now and my bday just right around the corner at 19 November.
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GrossDeutschland1935

@AmbarAnak Thank you very much. I will try my best to live upto the expectations of my readers
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ColonelX2

Hello there!
          
          I like the idea of the current story you are writing. Hope to see it continue! 
          
          It you would like, I can give you some tips on how to make your story more appealing to readers.

ColonelX2

@GrossDeutschland1935 nice one :)
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GrossDeutschland1935

@ColonelX2 Okay I will try
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ColonelX2

@GrossDeutschland1935 Just some initial improvements would to be use paragraphing more. What I do is add a new paragraph each time a new person is speaking. Also there may be a few spelling mistakes in the chapter titles. In paragraphs you can get away with it, but everyone can see the chapter names. 
            
            I do hope I'm not being a grammer n@zi but these initial improvements would greatly improve the first opinion readers have when first coming across your story. 
            
            I have yet to finish you story but it looks really interesting! Hope to read more soon. If you would like any advice or support for your story let me know. Especially with story ideas. 
            
            Keep writing friend!
            Colonel X
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