the_guardian233

Your book is weird in a good way and fun. And i love the character's room and pool and kitchen. Well done!!

GundhamTanaka2000

@the_guardian233 WHY DID I NOT THINK OF THAT BEFORE UGHHHHH IM SO DUMB!!! Sorry for all caps I'm just noticing how stupid I really am thank you so much probably gonna lose sleep but I'm an horrible sleeper so not out of the norm anyway if you have any more suggestions or ides or criticism I can take so tell if you want any time
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the_guardian233

@the_guardian233 try to write the character's first interaction with Shoto
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GundhamTanaka2000

@the_guardian233 AWWWW thank you so much if it's not to much to ask is there anything I can improve or and on I've just been doing one shots cause I don't know how to contuine the main story help!!!!
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the_guardian233

Hey GundhammTanaka2000's. I am Maria. The auther of Warmth. Can you give me some review on the story? It would mean a lot to me. Thanks ❤

GundhamTanaka2000

@the_guardian233 Oh I was also wondering if you could give me some feed back on my book A Life With Pokeballs  my todoroki x oc book Thank you
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GundhamTanaka2000

@the_guardian233  Sure why not! I don't know why you chose me though I'm not that good at writing but I will give you the best advice i have
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