Gunj40

Hey lovelies, just posted chapter 15 of Unfaithful Love.
          	
          	https://www.wattpad.com/1653490499?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=Gunj40

Lunarlong

Hi, 
          
             Just completed Unfaithful heart. 
          Excellent work. 
          Some mistakes deserve second chance only when doer realize what he had broken not just some trust but shattered faith. Which cannot be patched. 
             You can only gain it back by sincere efforts & repentance. Dominic realise and listened to everyone with out letting ego getting his intentions. 
              As for Sera, she is hurt but she didn't let it takeover her life. Yes she felt miserable but she genuinely wanted to open the door at her own pace. 
               For a relationship failure not only two people are responsible. It takes a lot more of people, who constantly fill your ears with the insult of other person. It will effect the judgement of the victim or perpetrator. 
              Your portrayal of the support characters is excellent. Dominic is surrounded by people, who guided him in the right direction and genuinely wanted them to be together. 
            Sera's support gave her enough space to think for herself. And a silent support which she needed most. 
                 I felt really refreshed while reading. 
          I completed it in one go. 
          I really enjoyed the story. 
          
          Thank you for the wonderful treat. A clean writing. 
          
          All the best with your work. 
          Have a blessed writing.

Gunj40

Thank you so much for liking my story, it means a lot. Do check out my other second chance stories. Unfaithful Heart has two sequels already out. Unfaithful Promise, completed and Unfaithful Love, ongoing. Readers like you motivate me to write even better stories.😊😊❤️❤️. If you want to buy ebook of Unfaithful Heart on amazon kindle, link is in my profile.
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