Gyemawrites

Hi. I'm new on this app. Could you please check out my book and let me know what you think? I'd really appreciate the feedback and criticism.
          
          Here's the link:
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/369662898?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Penitreal

BEEN A WHILE - New UPDATE 
          Let’s goooooo 

CHAPTER 5 OF WEINA IS NOW UP!!!
          Mild hot scene up ahead (wink  wink )

Hello realagyekay, 
          
          I just wanted thank you for the follow. Your awesome! Anyway, I'll be sure to read your story and I'm happy another writer followed me!

Thanks for the follow! 
          Please feel free to check out my profile! 

CHECK THE NEW CHAPTER OUT!!!! 
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/241705392

Heyy, I'm not sure if you're comfortable reading Smuts but, a friend of mine started a smut ff acct with two of her friends... She's just put up her first jjk oneshot! 
          If your comfortable reading Smuts, could you please give it a shot? 
          Or could you please drop a vote? She'd love it!❤️
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/271102790

Helloooo!
          Sorry to disturb you, but I have something to share with you!( ꈍᴗꈍ)
          
          I'm currently writing a fanfic named Promise. It's a Jungkook (from bts) fanfiction.^^
          
          I've just posted chapter 12, could you please give it a try? It would really mean a lot to me.❤️
          
          The chapters are short, so it'll take less of your time too!｡◕‿◕｡
          
          Link:
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/256886303?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=library&wp_uname=gurneetjuneja&wp_originator=Sr990%2FnMTFzPXzqgyEdXuFH2NJikCRFdkJauekow9NzhDnRyFc%2FQCgLwUJLheVrDzVSemFlRZRuUhSDu9wKaFtjlwqlXBSEBN1aGGx8tlMFq01LZdS4RlI9TYrmkcQ9Z
          
          Thankyou soo much already!!❤️

Thanks for the follow I followed u back❤️

I'm worried about this book...what should I Do??  :(((