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Hey HDN Sorry if i didn't have time to read you're things i was busy with my stuff and didn't have enough time
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I finally uploaded the Remastered versions of Chapters 1 & 2 of Birds of Power: The Awakening. Now I can continue working on Chapter 3
Wattpad: https://wattpad.com/story/346138259-birds-of-power-the-awakening #BirdsOfPower #BirdsOfPowerTheAwakening
Sidenote: Some changes were made to add some foreshadowing in the story (plus, there's an MLB reference added in chapter 2)
Also, I'm going to start monetizing chapters. Future chapters that are story-focused will cost $10 US Dollars while filler chapters will be free to read.
Hey HDN Sorry if i didn't have time to read you're things i was busy with my stuff and didn't have enough time
Hey I was just wondering if you want to check out my stories cause they're really cool and I hope you like them so far please :(
@ElizaWright975 I despise Verosika not only for what she did to Moxxie but also because she's one of those toxic, resentful characters who blame other people for things that aren't their responsibility. Blitz may have broken Verosika's heart, but he didn't force Verosika into becoming an alcoholic and a horrible person; she chose that path. I also despise that she hosts parties every year dedicated to wishing death to her ex, girl, that is just messed up, you need to move on. Not to mention how much victim-blaming she and Stols (And even Vortex) did to Blitz in Apology Tour (My second worst episode).
@HDN4ll5arts nice chapter you create(also, Finally someone who don't have daddy issues and Kinks and fetishs for gloryfiying S/a and Victim , overly glazing by making someone a "uwu he is good boi he didn't do nothing wrong"(looking at you Viv and your shitty writing too), poor Mox though, You know the fact if, imagine if i create a OC but as Moxxie's Sister but the middle sibling to Protect Moxxie from Versosika as She is about to beat the living crap out of her for S/a Moxxie without consent makes me want her to be jumped on for a reason is seriously a idea i had to get what Verohoe Deserve, get it? because she is a hoe? To be Honest i don't know what the HB fandom and the so-called Verosika "fans" see in her, Like Dude i get that she is "HOt" but that doesn't excuse the fact for what she did something unforgivable You know maybe the fandom didn't simping on Verosika, maybe they would touch grass.
@ElizaWright975 I don't want to make Emily call the sinners 'innocent', she's aware that they did awful crimes that got them sent to hell. As for my fic regarding Verosika, Stols, and Vortex getting Karma, thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I really despised "Apology Tour" for how they treated Blitz. How is celebrating a party about wishing for your ex to die make you any better than the ex? Spectra is evil and hypocritical, even more than Verosika, but at least she's self-aware.
@HDN4ll5arts Shinigami has long black hair that usually obscures half of her right face with and she wears white foundation over her entire face with light pink to accentuate her cheek bones and purple eyeshadow that's similar to Karai's, her lips are coated in purple lipstick to complete the Ghost-like look she goes for. Her outfit cosists of a black and purple bodysuit with Yellow tiger stripes on her waist and a yellow stone on her belly button area. In addition she wears long black leg warmers and matching long gloves and Gnome like shoes. She wears a cape with a Batwing motiv which looks like a dress whenever she closes it around her, Also, you do know that Shinigami is A mystical Witch, right? For me i don't think a ninja style outfit would fit her very well in general since she is a witch, a classic tmnt 90s 1987 witch style would fit her in general meaning it would make sense since, again, She is the mystical Witch.
@ElizaWright975 She'll probably look a like her 2012 design, but maybe give her a black and blue ninja style outfit with purple hues, keep her japanese ethnicity, give her a different hairstyle (hair buns or ponytails), give her a mask and keep her weapons ( with the same colors as her outfit)
@HDN4ll5arts Similar?, as in the 1987 tmnt version?, what about what would her outfit and personailty in the tmnt 1987 version? How would the colors palettes of 1987 of her outfit, skin tone, and her hair would lowkey fit her in a similar to her 2012 counterpart but in a way that keeps the tone of the 1987 version, what would her outfit, weapons similar to her 2012's version, and her hair but in a 1987 style, in a what non-canon 1987 episode would be where she first appeared and met the turtles and april?
I know that the fact Shinigami was first appeared in tmnt 2012 series of the episode called "City of War", but what would she look like if she was in TMNT but the 1987 tmnt version?
Just because i'm saying this doesn't mean she exists, she only exist in the tmnt 2012 series. If she WERE to be in the 1987 tmnt versiom series, wondered what her personailty look like and were to meet her tmnt 2012 version
@HDN4ll5arts Similar?, as in the 1987 tmnt version?, what about what would her outfit and personailty in the tmnt 1987 version? How would the colors palettes of 1987 of her outfit, skin tone, and her hair would lowkey fit her in a similar to her 2012 counterpart but in a way that keeps the tone of the 1987 version, what would her outfit, weapons similar to her 2012's version, and her hair but in a 1987 style, in a what non-canon 1987 episode would be where she first appeared and met the turtles and april? I kinda lowkey have some gel pens, fruit scented gel pens, and all of that stuff to how to make her in 1987 style, so how would i sketch something and no I,m not using AI because i'm fully aware ai art is not real art, drawing and sketches is real art but doesn't mean it's perfect
@ElizaWright975 I think she'll be similar to her 2012 version, but in a way that keeps the tone of the 1987.
No really i meant in general and non-canonly but with their canon personailties, Like How Would Rose Red meet Her Stepmother(Evil Queen)?
@ElizaWright975 I think she would respect her being her stepmother, but would start to to be nervous around her once she shows her true colors and when she finds out about her plan on killing her and Snow, they would run away and find somewhere to find from the horrible witch.
I had question to ask, and i know that you never heard of Snow White's sister, Rose Red. How would Rose Red and Evil Queen aka Snow White's stepmother would meet each other and Evil Queen finds out that not only Snow White has a sister named Rose Red, but had or does not had the same beauty as Snow White's or Gives the poison Apple to Rose Red instead of Snow White? (Yes i know that Rose Red was not in Disney's Snow White (the classic version, not the live action i was talking about) canonly but not canon but in general and accurately.
also why didn't you use the actual colored backgrounds of all stories instead of using a ai-generated image ones on your own stories? You do realize that using both AI and Ai-Art images are not the real art, right?
@ElizaWright975 Mhmm... Maybe she's Snow White's long lost sister. To answer your second question, the AI images are only to give you an idea of what the place or items looks like. But, I'm planning to replace the ai images for the items. The only one I'm not replacing yet is the Goldmoon City cityscape, because I'm not good at drawing them.
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Video : Hazbin Hotel, Charlie, and How a Poorly Written Main Character Can Ruin Your (already terrible) Show(looking at you, Vizie, you and your fucking kinks and fuck your writing and jokes because they suck ass)
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Even going in with fairly low expectations, I was still shocked at how poorly written this show was.
But why? What makes it so incredibly bad? And, much more importantly, what can we learn about how to write better from Hazbin Hotel’s failures?
The more time I spent watching and thinking about this show, the more I realized that many of the show’s problems stem from the poorly written main character, Charlie Morningstar. Wow, Charlie sure likes to think of herself as a “good person” and wants you to think that too!
And that's part of the problem. In a show where one of the main plot points is Charlie hoping to “redeem” sinners, quite literally no one in the show knows what that means. Charlie thinks being a “good person” is just looking good outwardly and other people thinking nice things about her.
When there's a disagreement between her and Vaggie, she's not upset that Vaggie hid something from her, Charlie's angry that Vaggie didn't think she'd be understanding of the situation. And Vaggie was right. Charlie wasn't understanding of the situation!
Charlie wants others to think she's an understanding person, even though she's not. Morality is just an aesthetic to Charlie. And that's one of the reasons why she can't help her friends truly change and be "redeemed," (whatever that means).
So, in this video, and after summarizing the plot, I focus on the ideas in the story, how the story was told, individual characters, and how Charlie being written so poorly affects all of the above.
@ElizaWright975 I think the double standards regarding SA 'jokes' in Viv's works are a huge issue in the writing. I will never forgive Verosika for what she did to Moxxie, and I'm glad I changed Stolas' personality and backstory to make him a more likable character (even though I also made Ophiuchus to fulfill the role of antagonistic Stolas and become the main villain in Love & Murder).
@ElizaWright975 I think I saw the video before, and yeah, Canon Charlie only seemed to care about others when they're interested in what she wants.
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