HGB43ver

@GKBrill ok nman ung imagination mo sa story pero need lng tlaga ng consistency sa flow ng story and character kasi medyo nagrambol. I am not a writer I am just a wide reader that's why I can tell if the story is ok or not. Just be open for constructive criticism otor and you will be on ur way  Goodluck! 

GKBrill

@HGB43ver I AM OPEN FOR ANYTHING AND AMINADO AKO MARAMING FLAWS PO IYON. FIRST MSYSTERY/THRILLER GENRE PA EH. HAHHA... PERO IYONG BOOK 2, I'M SURE WAS PLANNED AND WITH CONSISTENCY ;D
          	  
          	  PS. DI PO AKO GALIT, MAGANDA LANG KASI TINGNAN ANG CAPSLOCK ^_^
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HGB43ver

@GKBrill ok nman ung imagination mo sa story pero need lng tlaga ng consistency sa flow ng story and character kasi medyo nagrambol. I am not a writer I am just a wide reader that's why I can tell if the story is ok or not. Just be open for constructive criticism otor and you will be on ur way  Goodluck! 

GKBrill

@HGB43ver I AM OPEN FOR ANYTHING AND AMINADO AKO MARAMING FLAWS PO IYON. FIRST MSYSTERY/THRILLER GENRE PA EH. HAHHA... PERO IYONG BOOK 2, I'M SURE WAS PLANNED AND WITH CONSISTENCY ;D
            
            PS. DI PO AKO GALIT, MAGANDA LANG KASI TINGNAN ANG CAPSLOCK ^_^
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