Hi,
I just came across your book, every moment after and I kinda find your description offensive.
Sure, it's a fan fic and your interpretation of the original books but I feel it has a sort of odd description on the main page.
Why would Lilly ever have to choose between feminism and love? I mean, isn't feminism about choosing what ever you want to and whatever you believe in? Why should choosing Rikkard Ambrose be at the cost of her losing her identity? Her identity as a feminist? I'm sorry it's just that this one specific line in your description page has been bugging me.
Well, that's it.