Well, I’ll start by saying I see now why I’ve heard such good things about grammarly. It really helped me fine tune things, like my sloppy punctuation.
I also smoothed out a couple things in Telegraph Hill that weren’t working right and it seems to flow better now.
Im still looking for people to read and critique Telegraph Hill thus far. If anyone’s interested let me know, I’d appreciate the help.
I hope you’re all having a Happy New Year.