HPfangirl78

Hello Everyone. First a huge thank you to everyone who’s read Actions Not Words. I can’t believe it’s actually reached 5.5K. 
          	I’m still working slowly but surely on Telegraph Hill. I posted a couple new chapters   but the story is still a choppy. Still feel free to comment I’d love to get some feedback. 
          	Have a great day and thanks for stopping over.

HPfangirl78

Hello Everyone. First a huge thank you to everyone who’s read Actions Not Words. I can’t believe it’s actually reached 5.5K. 
          I’m still working slowly but surely on Telegraph Hill. I posted a couple new chapters   but the story is still a choppy. Still feel free to comment I’d love to get some feedback. 
          Have a great day and thanks for stopping over.

HPfangirl78

Well, I’ll start by saying I see now why I’ve heard such good things about grammarly. It really helped me fine tune things, like my sloppy punctuation.
          I also smoothed out a couple things in Telegraph Hill that weren’t working right and it seems to flow better now. 
          Im still looking for people to read and critique Telegraph Hill thus far. If anyone’s interested let me know, I’d appreciate the help. 
          I hope you’re all having a Happy New Year. 

HPfangirl78

I just wanted to take a minute and thank everyone who's taken the time to read, vote and comment. I really appreciate all your feedback. I can't believe my little fanfic has over two and a half thousand reads. Thank you all so much.