So i read Wolf Guardians and i gotta say it sounds pretty legit. It had me interested to read more. I cant say much about the plot considering you only got 1 chapter down so far but if i were to give any advice. You could try using more metaphor to help the reader visualize certain scenes. Ex: "The Wolf's mane had a golden tint similar to that of a setting sun and his fur a solid grey, like the dead city of ash and destruction that was his home. His eyes had a black coloration not only revealing his demonic origin but also symbolising the inner black pit of death, the epitome of his damned soul." You could probably find better examples online but you get my point though. Its a pain in all honesty but i think it makes for more interesting character descriptions and scenery. Also go all out with vocabulary my dude. (Not that im judging your usage of vocab in your book. Im just throwing out generic tips)
