Hafsy

Hi, can you check out my book? There’s only a couple chapters but it’s called. We all need somebody. It’s still working in progress. Can you just tell me what you think about it? Ty

Hi! If you have the time, please check out my new book "Precious Burden" and leave your honest feedback.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/396926440

Hey! I just started this dark fantasy book!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/395371005?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=library&wp_uname=M00nBuns
          
          

assalamualaikum author can you check my story i would be happy if you review my story ....
          
          

نزلت بارت جديد من روايتي "إلى متى"!!التي كانت من قبل لهيب الظلال للاستفسار ادخلو على مرسى الاعلانات لدي 
          دموع، شوق، ليل طويل، ومكالمة تهز القلب…
          لا تفوتوه، دعمكم يهمني بزاف!
          أرائكم وتعليقاتكم تشجعني نكمل
          إقرأوه وشاركوني رأيكم!
          ⁦✨ #بارت_جديد #رواية_إلى_متى ⁦❤️‍⁩
          

I think you should mention whose pov is that before starting story then we can understand easily no offence thank you