Hailey Deyo

A short story I wrote a while ago. It's come to be one of my favorites, and I'm interested to know what others think of it. :) https://www.wattpad.com/story/102774967

Chapter three part four is up. I'm updating whenever there is a long enough window of oppurtunity. Not sure if I really like splitting it in these small parts though. Should I stick to around 500 words per part, or make them longer?
          
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