JoOnisMyWhOrE

Hello! I published my first ever Namjoon fanfic, and if you don't mind would you please give me some feedback on it? It's a flop lmao, but I really like writing and hope you kind like it :)
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/256892894-%F0%9D%94%90%F0%9D%94%B6-%F0%9D%94%88%F0%9D%94%AB%F0%9D%94%A4%F0%9D%94%A9%F0%9D%94%A6%F0%9D%94%B0%F0%9D%94%A5-%F0%9D%94%97%F0%9D%94%A2%F0%9D%94%9E%F0%9D%94%A0%F0%9D%94%A5%F0%9D%94%A2%F0%9D%94%AF-%E2%94%82%F0%9D%95%AC-%F0%9D%95%B9%F0%9D%96%86%F0%9D%96%92%F0%9D%96%8F%F0%9D%96%94%F0%9D%96%94%F0%9D%96%93-%F0%9D%96%8B%F0%9D%96%86%F0%9D%96%93%F0%9D%96%8B%F0%9D%96%8E%F0%9D%96%88%E2%94%82