Halberd

Care reading my epic fantasy story The Curse of Vvhen? I'm new and need some feedback. I'm currently reading yours :) (it's amazing!) Thanks.

Hello, was wondering if you'd be interestng in a full book swap with me? or perahps we could break it into chapter swaps? Just saw that you've done it before and I thought I would ask. If not, there is no hard feelings and no harm done!

Definite clarity improvement on the rewrite, congratulations. Would you mind critiquing my second chapter now?

I've rewritten the opening. Hopefully it introduces the story a little less confusingly now. A few people have said this but no one mention what, but one of my critic friends put his finger on it so we think we've dealt with the issue now. Hopefully.

I'm totally fine with urban fantasy, no need to worry. I'll probably get around to your story in an hour or two, then.

That sounds great. Most swaps on here are limited to the first chapter, and I'm happy with mine now no matter if the criticism is good or bad. 
          
          Just checking, you don't mind reading urban fantasy, do you? The last swap I had, well, little bit pointless. 

WELCOME TO WATTPAD! Good luck on your story!