@Sadusjp I'm thankful your willing to play around with a different writing style. however, I did delete my comment bc I realized Farley quickly that just bc you're writing style is a bit different than I'm used to doesn't you should change it. So yea... Thnx for acknowledging my tip but it's not the law to succes or anything, I've come to realise humans are "comfort/routine animals" so we like to stick to what we know but diversity is exiting and what you did is exactly that.