HaleighPrice

hey dudes! so it’s been like two years or something but i was thinking of rewriting my possessive alpha. let me know if y’all would like that!
          	
          	Benefits to the rewriting:
          	-same characters better plot line
          	-slams the patriarchy
          	-more background and characterization
          	-no * during curse words

StormyQuill

@HaleighPrice Hey! i know it's been 6 years since you last updated it but I think you should definitely rewrite it. The male lead is toxic and abusive as hell, you should try making a healtheir relationship bw them. Plus there are many key things left in your story which you never wrote. I hope wherever you are, you're okay btw!
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HaleighPrice

hey dudes! so it’s been like two years or something but i was thinking of rewriting my possessive alpha. let me know if y’all would like that!
          
          Benefits to the rewriting:
          -same characters better plot line
          -slams the patriarchy
          -more background and characterization
          -no * during curse words

StormyQuill

@HaleighPrice Hey! i know it's been 6 years since you last updated it but I think you should definitely rewrite it. The male lead is toxic and abusive as hell, you should try making a healtheir relationship bw them. Plus there are many key things left in your story which you never wrote. I hope wherever you are, you're okay btw!
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dynasty1980

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The story my possessive mate is the biggest pice of shit it has no story and you made ally look like a looser

HaleighPrice

@dynasty1980 honestly, I wrote that book like a while back. I do see the plot mistakes, and I admit I could have had better characterization, but it was my first book that I published, and I had no idea where I was going with it haha. Also, you spelled loser wrong. But thanks for the criticism! I'll be sure to re-write that book sometime and make it better.
            -Haleigh :)
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twilightluvr101

@dynasty1980 ɢօ tօ ɮʟօօɖʏ ɦɛʟʟ aռɖ sʊċҡ ʍʏ ռօռ ɛxsɨstɨռɢ ɖɨċҡ ʏօʊ ʟɨttʟɛ քʀɨċҡ. Tɦat ɮօօҡ ɨs aաɛsօʍɛ aռɖ ʟɨʄɛ աɦɨʟɛ ʏօʊ'ʀɛ ʝʊst ʝɛaʟօʊs sօ ҡɨss ʍʏ ass
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jessxmay32

do you mind checking out my werewolf story, My Young Mate? please, tell me what you think of it if you do, I love hearing from my fans and readers and I wanna know if someone as good of a writer as you likes my story. if you can that would be great. and if you can share with all your friends and followers that would be the best! thanks!

tori_love02

Hey I read your book my possessive alpha and you said you were going to write sweet escape but I can't find it did you Delete it?? Or do you know how I can found it??? (Ps. Loved the book great job)

HaleighPrice

Wattpad accidentally deleted it but I think I'll re-write it sometime in 2016. Thanks for reading MPA!
            -Haleigh <3
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