@IantheG@apparency@joyley_is_the_best im sry. Ive been REALLY freaking busy. I'll try to do ur guys' requests. Im using an Android pad to look at this stuff right now, so i cant tell if there are more comments...
I know that you already have a few critiques to do on your list, and you can take as long as you need on them, but when you get the time would you mind critiquing the first (and only) chapter I have of Broken up?
I will look at one of yours now!
Thank you sooo much,
purpleswirlything
hey there, I saw your post in the crit classifieds, and was wondering if you could have a look at my story, Naturesse ^^ Feel free to do as many chapters as you want, but just one's fine.
I'll be sure to hold up my end of the bargain, thanks very much ^_^ x
- Ianthe
@HaleyAnulies101 hi, could u please critique my first story The Teen Dream? It's my first work in English, and if you could review one or two of the later chapters (pref. from 8-20), that'd be great. Just voted for Gracious :) Thanks in advance!