MyztikalTearz

Geez - looks like your read count jumped like 100 from yesterday :)
          
          What doesn't work?
          
          Set up each "book" separately then.
          
           Shades of Grey  Book 1 - Commencement
          Shades of Grey  Book 2 - The Devil's Island
          
          Keep all of that info on the cover - it's easier to pull the books to read because it can be moved around on someone's shelf or by date/time uploaded on wattpad.
          
          If you can explain to what's going wrong, I can try to help you better or have someone contact you to help :)

MyztikalTearz

@EmilyShaindlin 
          
          I noticed that they were more bite size :)
          
          I think it looks a LOT LESS intimidating now, too :)
          
          I hadn't realized the variety you had in this! So in that aspect, I'm not qualified to say if it should be set up into different "books". 
          
          There are writers who have combined several smaller stories into larger "books' and writers who have separated their works into smaller books. If you glance at my shelf under the heading "Chronicles/Trilogies/Sagas" you'll see what I'm referring to. 
          
          You may want to send a note out to them and ask for their inout or advice or reasons for what they have done. 
          
          There is one writer who did a series - I think it was Kidnapped 1,2,3 who had done one or the other. She's not on my shelf, but you can browse through search for it-her user name is Madi303) , and she may give you some insight as well.

MyztikalTearz

@EmilyShaindlin 
          
          chapter by chapter
          
          I just noticed the first starts with Part Two? Or was that a typo? 
          
          If it's all the same story, then by all means, keep it together.
          
          I love the longer novels (most of them are in my Read Later folder as it takes longer to get get through - and those are what is stored on my ip4 cuz the app has a book marking feature). But I've noticed the longer novel - especially the lengthy chapters don't get as much reads on wattpad.com.
          
          I hate using my ip4 because I'll forget to vote and comment - or I don't vote/comment cuz it's easier to do on the .com
          
          Am I making any sense? I don't want a great novel to go unnoticed or for the writers to feel they aren't getting reads if a small alternation can increase its marketability.
          
          So, if like in Part 2, the 4th page where this is a new heading - break those up into additional chapters. I think even that small change  will increase chances of people reading your story. You'll also gain more votes, possibly additional comments, and it will be a little closer to getting more visibility here.
          :)
          
          If I'm not making sense, I can try to explain it another way :)