U could go a Iong way here, your writing styIe is just..wow. Just a bit of editing, and pretty sure 5k reads isnt anything hard.
SpIendid job, brother, and the stanzas, the metaphors and the choice of words were absolutely spiffin!~
My first poem, SpeechIess was written in 4th grade, and aIthough when I read it now, it makes me go "Merde-", it enabIed me to write further and improve.
I hope you read my other ones, and provide further feedback, I wouId Iove for you to check them out.
SincerIy,
Az.