Helllooo. I've written a new book and desperately need feedback on how it is. It's called The Dagger Of Crimsonia.
It'd mean a lot if you read it and gave me advice\feedback!!
Link: https://my.w.tt/2tEjQ2Gg9O
@HalleyCat I think the story is good. It would help it flow better, if you told the reader who was saying what,because at some points I had to reread to figure out which character was talking. You did a great job developing a plot for the story:)