I've been writing for a while now, and I need someone to tell me if what I'm doing is good. Since I started writing, it's been only for me. Now, I want to share it. I'd like to be a writer when I get older, but for now this is my life. All (constructive) criticisms welcome and appreciated!
- Calgary, AB, Canada
- JoinedFebruary 27, 2017
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This is my first time publishing any of my writing. I would love it if someone could tell me how I'm doing. It's just a short story, but I would really like to improve my writing, so if anyone could...View all Conversations
Stories by Halloe Miriwell
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The Warrior
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Kerra's kingdom is in ruin, her princess has fallen. Who is this man? What does he want?