The reworked version of my book's second chapter is out now! Work on the third chapter will begin soon!
I hope I am bringing more clarity about the plot and general enjoyment of the story to anyone who read my book's "first draft".
Of course unfortunately this chapter by chapter reworking/-writing of my story will create a very harsh and confusing transition from the new chapters to the old ones, but that is just how it's going to be for now!
Chapter 1 & 2 are done, the rest is WIP!
Once that's done, the main story will continue!