Hi thank you for ur request. I haven't read it but the intro or synopsis whatever u like to say, should be a bit longer. It is meant to explain the book. A line doesn't really do that for u. So I think u should at least extend it to let the readers know about the book. And it's short too. From the genre description the book seems a good one but if u want to develop a love story based on contracts u should make the book considerably longer. Long enough to dramatically or logically make ot happen. 'It' as in love. I don't really read short lovestory books. That's my personal opinion. So...
I hope my tips will work out for u.
