Hanajson

@Legoscrapisawesome It could be worse, but so far manageable. When I said rewrite, I meant that I was going to elaborate more not change the way the story is going, if you wondering. If you have any questions, feel free to ask.

@Legoscrapisawesome dang man I feel bad for the hell known as college that you have to go through

@Legoscrapisawesome Sorry about being so slow. I have college and work that I am dealing with and that I am fleshing out the ideas for an second story I am working on. So far my progress is more focused on rewriting the story to make the chapters longer and feel like they covered an hour of time, roughly.