Larissa

i love your books! i would LOVE to get your opinion on mine! :) <3

Thanks so much!  God bless!

@stellanator
          
          This is a great start. Watch out for those pesky run on sentences though. It's a habit that most writers fall into and I'm giving that out as one of my most popular critiques. That, and the sentence format. Watch how you phrase your sentences, some were a little difficult to follow because they seemed like scattered thoughts.
          
          Good luck and happy writing! 

@Anime_Cartooon_Girl 
          
          Your story definitely has the potential to go somewhere. However, the context is... More on the surface. Try to delve a little deeper. Connect with the characters on a personal level so that the readers can do the same. Great start, just try to broaden the horizons with character creation. 

could you critique my story?  Two Wishes?  Thank you!  God Bless! ><>

@annie0599 It is, but I might do a sequel if I find that more people like my writing. 

@fromyourlips You have no idea how much I needed to hear that. Thank you so much for that amazing support. I seriously needed that boost of confidence in my writing and you gave that to me. I sincerely appreciate it.

@crimsonrayne1892 Awh Thank you

@azul_ryder I appreciate that. Thank you. :)

@hopelove7 It's finished for now. I'm working on a new story though. Check it out. I hope you like it.