Hannah456

@xXxJezzxXx ur welcome!

blazing_dreams4

Hey there! If you get the chance, could you maybe read my story? 
          
          Title: Midoria's Heart.
          Genre: Adventure, Fantasy, Romance
          Description:
          
          Light... Darkness...
          
          A magical kingdom in the sky called Midoria faces this constant struggle for power. For thousands of years, the power of Light has beat down the darkness, thanks to the great but mysterious power of Midoria's Heart. However, the Dark power is quickly growing and spreading, bringing the threat of death and destruction to the once peaceful kingdom.
          
          After the horrendous murder of her parents, 17 year old Adelle must return to live with her grandparents, the rulers of the kingdom of Midoria. It is there that Adelle discovers a secret room hidden in the castle, which holds clues to the whereabouts of the lost Heart of Midoria, and the Dark power that it once sealed away.
          
          But time is running out, and the seal that binds the Darkness is wearing thin. Adelle must rush to save her kingdom from the coming evil before it is too late, but at the same time, she must make a decision much closer to her own heart. A choice that could cost her everything; one that could change her entire future.
          
          ~♥~ 
          
          Please read it and let me know what you think! ALL comments are welcome!
          Thank you so much!!

serval

Hey, I know the­­­­­­­­se are super ann­oy­in­g,­ a­nd­ I­'m­ not gonna beg
          But I have this story called
          'An Albino On A­­­­­­­­ Reality Show.. ­Wh­at­ c­ould go wrong?'
          that I was hopi­­­­­­­­ng you could tak­e ­a ­lo­ok­ a­t ­an­d ­give­ my ­some feedback!
          Thanks, I know ­­­­­­­­these get annoying!
          (:

SyerraJaneXoXoX

Hi:) I know you­ probebly get tons of these bu­t... I was wondering if you co­uld read my story. I'm new and­ it's my first story...ever. A­nd I would really love it if y­ou could read it and give it s­ome constructive criticism. Ma­bey vote or comment? 
          I't would be mu­ch appriciated! 
          And in retern I­ will read anything that you want me to:)