AshenPage

Hi there.  Thank you very much for reading first chapter of my story Initium novum, I know the first chapter are not great, i was inexperienced and jumped right into writing, but hey, still I hope you gonna like the story.  
          If so, please, vote, comment on chapters, and share the story with others. It would mean a lot to me. Constructive criticism is always welcome. Thank you very very much.