dat1wirdo
Hi, on a previous Wattpad story you asked for my opinion on your story. I think it's quite good but I feel that you are rushing the story too much. You need to give time for the reader to process what has happened in the story before adding new information. I also think that at the start of the book you suddenly brought in lot's of new characters too soon. You should add characters at a more even pace so that they are more memorable. Also you should have added more dialogue in the first chapter because I think you mentioned how the people also have powers a little late in the story and it was a bit confusing. Otherwise I think your doing a great job.
Hannoshadow
Okay, I want your opinion on the idea of the story, regardless of how it was written. Is it the idea that the sky is covered by the sea and that the earth has become the property of the demons, and because of the sacrifice of the Serfuro, he gave a last chance to humans?
Hannoshadow
@ dat1wirdo Thank you very much for your opinion. I really liked how you gave me your full opinion without flattery.
dat1wirdo
I recommend reading 'How to write a book' by Sea_Zoe it gives lot's of different writing tips and I think it will be useful if you plan on writing a full length story.