HappyMidas

@randomthoughts96 and there you go- I proved it... I made a few spelling and grammar errors there.. Please pardon... And that wasn't 'cow'.. It was supposed to be cos... Sigh..

Bdicocco

Thank you so much for your recent votes on Shift! I hope you are enjoying the story so far :)

HappyMidas

@Bdicocco THank YOU so much for writing an irresistible story. Lovely character development... And LOVED the Lexi-Psychic twist.. as in I felt sorry for Helio, but loved that the twist took me completely unaware..
            
            Thank you.. It has been a pleasure.. .and I am hoping I get to read a lot more of your works, and that you get published & recognised...
            
            And now I shall stop rambling.. :)
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HappyMidas

@randomthoughts96 sorry for not replying earlier. I loved your story, and the complexity to the characters. Glad to see a Lady night who wasn't getting stuffed into dresses, and could fall in love being herself :)
          Awesome work.. Few errors here and there, but you'd have to be the God of Grammar and Spellcheck to avoid those-it happens to the best :)
          
          Loved your work. Been meaning to leave comments, but reading on my phone makes it hard. I promise to go back and leave comments :)
          
          Looking forward to Love and Honour.. To be honest a part of me really hopes Jasiel isn't dead, cos I detest the other two G men.. Yucky guys.. Or will your next book change my heart about them too? Not sure.. Can't wait to find out.. 
          
          And I also can't wait for you to hit million reads, cow believe it or not, that's gonna happen, and probably sooner rather than later :)
          
          Good luck and thanks for providing me with an awesome escape to Sparrow's world...
          
          By the way, I noticed a trend of bird names among the Iceni and Animal namwe among the Usani.. Am I seeing! things that aren't there, or was that intended? Any significance?
          
          Cheers,
          Go get them stars, moons and other satellites
          
          HM

randomthoughts96

@HappyMidas see I made another mistake writing on my tablet, it was meant to be sometimes I read back through...
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randomthoughts96

@HappyMidas That's absolutely fine, just wanted to let you know how grateful I was :) I'm immensely pleased you liked Sparrow's character and story. Yeah I know, so stones I read back and through and notice I've missed words out and the grammar isn't quite right. One day I will go back and fix it. It made me smile when you made a few mistakes, definetly happens to the best of us. 
            Well I really appreciate you reading and voting and I will especially appreciate any comments you decide to leave but please do not feel pressured! 
            Ooh I think I may disappoint you then, I'm looking forward to you reading Love and Honour and it will interesting to see if you grow more or less fond of them. 
            You're very welcome and you need to know that you've made my week with all of your votes and your lovely long comment. 
            There is a trend but it's more because I sometimes struggle with names and it was nice to follow a pattern... I think they are pretty strong and memorable names also.
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Mistalee_

Hey there! Thanks for the vote on Is He A She?! Do you like it so far?

HappyMidas

@Mistalee_  oops- i didn't mean the tamil words were used wrongly.. I was talking about the overall picture..
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HappyMidas

@Mistalee_  Hey Kavya! Thou art very welcome :) Booka ore naallla mudichten. Nice one, especially if you wrote down the plot when you were thirteen :)
            Loved the usage of tamil words.
            Although, some words were used in the wrong place or wrong sense. For eg- pursue higher studies became persuade higher studies. I'm guessing you are pressed for time and didn't have time to edit. Would you be offended if I offered help on that fore?
            
            Good luck, fellow tamizhachi :)
            
            Hope you have an awesome writing spree ahead :)
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