HarleyB098

New book posted- Neon Fracture. Dystopian, gangs and love triangles.  Sequel to Between beats is underway to but was hit with inspiration for this AU story. Let me know what you think :)
          	
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/410360412-neon-fracture

kageyamasatoru

hi friend!! i know you’ve voted on some past chapters of my fic spring morning, and i just wanted to let you know i published chapter 24 if you’d be willing to vote, it would be so so appreciated!! no pressure if you don’t want to! tysm!! ❤️❤️

kageyamasatoru

hi friend!! tysm for voting on some chapters of my lee know fic spring morning!! no pressure at all, but if you’d be willing to vote on chapter 11 too, it would be so so appreciated!! i posted it on my message board as well. tysm again and have a wonderful day!! ❤️

kageyamasatoru

@HarleyB098 omg ofc I’d love to look at your book!! i also just published chapter 12 of spring morning if u would be willing to vote on that!! tysmmm <33
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HarleyB098

@kageyamasatoru  hey!! all done my lovely!! Loved the update and chapter 10 was definitely a fave, love the drama! Updated my story too with a few juicy chapters if you fancy a read? <3
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baeliyyahz

baeliyyahz

@HarleyB098 thank you sm ❤️
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HarleyB098

@baeliyyahz Ofc! Will add this to my reading list!
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xlovliesx

heyyyy!! you asked me for some pointers:)
          i honestly don't have a lot, i love this so much already, especially the last chapter, i find bringing a bit of drama in early on makes a reader keep reading, atleast for me personally i want to keep reading if there's drama at the beginning. as for pointers the only thing I can really say is longer chapters!! when i first started writing, i always found that the books that did better were the ones with longer chapters, and for me personally i much prefer longer chapters in a book:) if you think you can add more detail, definitely add more detail
          also, if your readers are low to start off with, dont let it weigh you down because mine were rock bottom for so long, I just kept writing and publishing and set myself little milestones to achieve like 100 reads, 200 reads etc etc but you're doing great! 
          if you want any other help feel free to ask but im not an insane writer :) x

HarleyB098

Thankyou so much for this - I was always worried with how long the chapters need to be but I’m excited to try it - I am glad you’re enjoying it, an update is in the works so watch this space!x
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