HarleyD77

Finally added a new chapter. This writing stuff is a lot harder than I thought it would be!

HarleyD77

OK, so I've updated the first five chapters, hopefully correcting all grammatical and spelling errors, as well as making a couple of minor changes to make things flow more smoothly. I don't know if anyone is actually following this story, but if you are, please drop a line here, so I'll know. Thanks!