BevvTv

Hello! Can you read my book "The Pathway" and tell me if you like it. If not, can you give me tips/advice on how to improve. Thank you.

HarleyQuinn123456783

@BevvTv  oo and i also think for the tips you should sleep through the night and in the morning all of you family is gone and its just you in the house and then you hear something tha
            t sounds like a song and its creepy and you go to look at it and you see your brother, mom and dad in a chair tied up and they are about to get killed unless you fined someone else for him / she to kill!. I hope that helps!
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HarleyQuinn123456783

@BevvTv  Wow i loved it and no nothing needs to be changed! Keep up the great work!!<3
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HarleyQuinn123456783

@BevvTv Sure i can and i bet ill like it!
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