WatHoney

Hi, just wanted to let you know that i felt MY previous way of writing was too dull so i re-edited the chapter 1 and 2 with higher stakes, geez, no one is reading them now so it wasn't an issue, but i remember you reading 1 2 3 so, i mean, ch 1 and 2 are lot changed..
          
          So, sorrrrry but please can you not read more for now? i will be posting A BIG ANNOUNCEMENT IN MY BOARD SOON WHEN I AM DONE EDITING THE CHAPTERS.
          
          I suddenly re-read them and felt it was rather dull, with internal monologue so wanted to raise higher stakes, and i re-published chapter 1 and 2, i will soon do it all in few days and post the announcement soon.
          
          I know I should've completed before posting but you don't get better ideas until you read feedback from everyone and i did so too after getting some criticism from a few friends!!

Harmony5891

Aww okay I definitely understand, thank you for letting me know. I will hold off from reading for now, can’t wait to read the revised story!
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WatHoney

I know the frustration but...let's be realistic, i am sorry, please please please just don't read more, for now, just ch 1 and 2 re-edit is done so you can again but not more. I can draft it but what if i lose the reads and stuff you know
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WatHoney

And By edit i meant ALL the chapters, i have edited 2 in a row and changed almost all the scenes, to raise tension and chemistry.
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