HarperRayban777

@ohdeir No problem, your work is excellent! 

HarperRayban777

@desertrose270 well, i am trying to get better at description. i fall victim to the first rule of writing. "Show, don't tell." but i often see the scenes so clearly... i just don't know how to describe... ugh i'm trying to widen my vocabulary, and try not to tell people everything that i want them to know haha. but i'm learning. :)