Reminder!
To make a good story takes time. You won't be a great author just in one night. You won't gain writing skills just in one try.
Keep writing.
Keep writing.
Keep writing.
And don't forget to improve your writing style.
From how you always did—only typed from however you wanted, to the new style where everyone will read at ease, could understand what the story is, not too boring and not too hard to read, and most importantly, they could enjoy reading it.
Writing a story is not the same as your daily conversation. It's about how you tell a story into words; must be in detail (but not so detail), imagine how people will understand it (not everyone can understand you), and last but not least, you keep growing to be better.
