HarryPotterCambridge

The Family Predicament(Book 3 of Trilogy) Chapters 1-25 are NOW DONE!! Do check it out. Longest book of the Trilogy!!

sandeeplingubuktha

Hey, the plot is really intriguing. And I really liked Dumbledore's history in the 6th chapter. I mean no offence but the story could do with a bit of polishing. The writing could be a bit more encapturing.(I don't know how good is mine, but my beta really helped).
          I suggest you ask someone to beta the story. They will provide valuable advice. English is not my native language or else I would have tried to help a bit more. And post it on ffn and siye, where many people will be happy to give advises.
          I hope I didn't discourage you. The plot is really good.
          
          All the besy

sandeeplingubuktha

It's fanfiction.net. An app is available for mobile.
            
            Siye is a website too.
            
            Cheers!!
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HarryPotterCambridge

@sandeeplingubuktha Whats ffn and siye?
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