Some of your critique is pretty harsh, it's wattpad. Its not going to be professionals and how can you critique if you don't have books of your own written. I'm sorry but that's a bit unfair, sure if you had written good quality books on here then yes its okay but being a fan of a book series doesn't make you an expert on how to write a book :/ You do give some good criticism but just don't make it put in a way like you are a professional at this if your not. Just saying no one likes a no it all and i'm not saying i know how to critique a book or write one i'm just stating that you should seriously tone it down
