HarryStyles0008

Happy New year

NathanEmpuerto

"After All" 
          
          "I expect too much from this story..  Ganda na ng simula at execution ng story. Okay n yung twist.. Maganda ung plot form ng first chapter hangang sa chapter n "sorry".. Then after that nawala n yung twist at execution ng story.. Lakas n ng dating at tama ng kwento ng story ni jeff at bryan. Hindi rin naging maganda ang ending. Parang minadali. Bitin kung baga.. Huhmm..  How i wish n may book 2 . lagayan ng twist yung story nila mike at bryan. Then ibigay ung gusto at ini'expect ng mga readers kay jeff and brayn. To make the matter short. Publish book 2. More execution and twist. Jeff and bryan up to the end.. Hehehe 
          Anyway. Atleast. You made a great job and god storyline. Keep up the good work. More power. And god bless." 

HarryStyles0008

@mc_xtian15 thank you. Watch out for more :)
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