HasenAnimemaster

@typ_of_pan i definitely hope so and i wish I get to see it. 

@ HasenAnimemaster  totally understandable. I hope that everything works out for you and that karma works its wonders <3

@typ_of_pan i definitely think so. That rascal is a menace whenever he's in my house. Just because he's 5 years younger doesn't mean he can do whatever tf he wants and yet, he does this. Destroying my months of work so easily. I have already decided to just focus on my original work now, since now schedule is tighter than ever. I have to work 9 hours a day to make at least 10000 rupees a month. And i am always exhausted, so it's not easy to find time and energy to write anything. 

@Jack02Black sent you a friend request, name : Niko Jin or hazen6198

@Jack02Black aye thanks bro, and it's good to know i can talk to someone. I am not a social person but that doesn't mean I don't talk. 
            
            Also i revised your short sub story again and realised a few key points. 
            
            First, the writing style, now as an experienced reader i can guess which character is talking to which, but for some new commers they might get a bit confused on like, who is even in this scene or that? SO i would suggest using Chat conversation style like I used in My story at the beginning and you can switch back to your original after 10-20 chapters. (Just a suggestion)
            
            Second, is the pacing, i felt a little confused on that part, I don't know how to explain it, but i felt like the pacing was a little off, don't if that's just me or what, but i think you should work on it more to make it fast enough to be not boring and slow enough to be understandable and easy to Digest. 
            
            That's all for now. I will be waiting to see your work in the future. Keep improving bro. 

@Jade9K can you tell me how you'd rate the first sub-story at least? I'm a bit too shy to publish work like that into public places like WP but I like asking one on one

@Jade9K sorry for the mad late reply. The reason that it is so complex is because I have been working on this series for so long and I wanted it to be unique. This ended up being the final product. A lot of people have also said that it is pretty complex and I agree that for the naked eye it is pretty confusing especially if your not familiar with complex magic systems like cursed energy or nen from hxh. But I kept it that way because it's something I'd like people see understand. And afterwards I hope they have the same vision as me when they finally understand the power system.

@Jade9K this is a second id of mine 

@Jack02Black aye i am doing good bro, hope you doing too. My life has just gotten busier and honestly I can't find much time to work on my Original story. Honest I don't even know where to start it begin with. My original work literally be a top tier Indian story if i write it correctly and I want it to be so, but i can't find any free time and drive to do it. Thanks for asking bro, i appreciate it. 

@Jack02Black well, that's if you want to, but not much will be mentioned from the first book in the later chapters except a few answers.

@Jack02Black yup i remember you buddy 

@Jack02Black I'm remiahNash6 to clear it up more-

What?

Oh like other games and YouTube and google

Yes l hate school working ☠️

If you wanna put it that way, sure. But I would suggest, stop scaling my character as he's just an OC 

@HasenAnimemaster alright so did hazen in 6th limiters was so strongly even surpass tier 0 character or beyond everything

@irwantoayau at the 7th Limiter, there's only one individual who would be his match, but I am not gonna spoil that one though