Niko Master

@Jack02Black sent you a friend request, name : Niko Jin or hazen6198

@Jack02Black aye thanks bro, and it's good to know i can talk to someone. I am not a social person but that doesn't mean I don't talk. 
            
            Also i revised your short sub story again and realised a few key points. 
            
            First, the writing style, now as an experienced reader i can guess which character is talking to which, but for some new commers they might get a bit confused on like, who is even in this scene or that? SO i would suggest using Chat conversation style like I used in My story at the beginning and you can switch back to your original after 10-20 chapters. (Just a suggestion)
            
            Second, is the pacing, i felt a little confused on that part, I don't know how to explain it, but i felt like the pacing was a little off, don't if that's just me or what, but i think you should work on it more to make it fast enough to be not boring and slow enough to be understandable and easy to Digest. 
            
            That's all for now. I will be waiting to see your work in the future. Keep improving bro. 

@Jade9K can you tell me how you'd rate the first sub-story at least? I'm a bit too shy to publish work like that into public places like WP but I like asking one on one

@Jade9K sorry for the mad late reply. The reason that it is so complex is because I have been working on this series for so long and I wanted it to be unique. This ended up being the final product. A lot of people have also said that it is pretty complex and I agree that for the naked eye it is pretty confusing especially if your not familiar with complex magic systems like cursed energy or nen from hxh. But I kept it that way because it's something I'd like people see understand. And afterwards I hope they have the same vision as me when they finally understand the power system.

@Jade9K this is a second id of mine 

@Jack02Black aye i am doing good bro, hope you doing too. My life has just gotten busier and honestly I can't find much time to work on my Original story. Honest I don't even know where to start it begin with. My original work literally be a top tier Indian story if i write it correctly and I want it to be so, but i can't find any free time and drive to do it. Thanks for asking bro, i appreciate it. 

@Jack02Black well, that's if you want to, but not much will be mentioned from the first book in the later chapters except a few answers.

@Jack02Black yup i remember you buddy 

@Jack02Black I'm remiahNash6 to clear it up more-

What?

Oh like other games and YouTube and google

Yes l hate school working ☠️

If you wanna put it that way, sure. But I would suggest, stop scaling my character as he's just an OC 

@HasenAnimemaster alright so did hazen in 6th limiters was so strongly even surpass tier 0 character or beyond everything

@irwantoayau at the 7th Limiter, there's only one individual who would be his match, but I am not gonna spoil that one though 

@HasenAnimemaster after superman vs saitama chapter was have reach to end could you lead hazen to conflict where touma vs othinus after world get destroyed

@HasenAnimemaster okay but i hope you add madoka kaname in goddess form with homura akemi in demon form to stop this madness fight in next chapter in your current story as special episode i mean these two girls stop saitama vs superman fight but in 7.20 seconds goku appeared and join fight that hype me now with madoka,homura join it

@AsoAso525 well the reaction part will have to wait because the reaction book will start after the current story is over which will happen by the end of this year, so be patient bro.