@Hashinazakura
If you're going to write a story, clear out what language you're going to use. Ummm, kapag taglish siya, ipaalam mo na agad sa description para clear and yeah, no expectations.
From my point of view yan ah from a fellow writer kasi yan din ung naging payo nila sa akin.
And yeah, I salute you unlike other taglish writers. At least yung mga sinusulat mo realistic, marami na kasi ngayon is masyadong far-fetched or nasobrahan mga sinusulat nila and they're too impossible. Yeah, I've committed that mistake in one or two books I've wrote but yeah, it's an advice.
Anyway, great job so far!