Hateroflife12

So I just finished reading mateless and found and I must say it's an interesting read but... It felt rushed and unfinished to me I'm a book worm and I've read a thousand books but this one it had so much potential to be something bigger there was no background, no growth, no depth, the meetups and the timings felt so rushed and so out of place I am saying this not to spite but maybe if it could get a rewrite because I feel it would be good book if it was more engaging 
          

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