HatsuneMiku<3

Oh my gosh you have to finish the Four Elements!!!! I do think that you have a almost repetitive  story for each girl like in describing the Queens "warmful smile" I feel like you should try describing it differently....Make it more like she looks different everytime she appears t somebody new. You should make like a drastic change because when and if the girls find each other and eventually meet, they would all be surprised. I feel like that would be interesting. Other than that I really like the story I can't wait to find out what happens later!

So, opinion on my new story, The Four Elements? What do you think of it so far???

Here is my new story! I am excited to have started this one. This is sorta a true story ( Stella's story ). I hope you enjoy my new story! Please leave comments, or even like it :) Thanks guys <3 Have a nice day. :)

So, opinions! Please, what do you think of my 1st story? Great! Needs improvement what?? And my next story is going to be involved with the four elements of Earth.  FIRE, WATER, EARTH, and lastly my favorite AIR <3 I hope you will enjoy this one that I am going to start writing after my 1st story is finished :P >-< Nite guys! :3

Okay, I am trying to finish up this story the best I can. Sorry, if it is dragging, hopefully chapter 5-( so on ) will be better for you guys! Thanks so much for reading>-< I already have an idea on the next book that I am going to type up :) Well, enjoy you nite and sleep well! :3

I don't know what kind of Genre Run..Run...Then Captured would be under, it has a little bit of some genres. I hope you enjoy the story!! :) Leave me comments please :)