Hauven

Hey Hauven!
          
          Just reaching out to get back to you about reviewing your book 
          Axel In Room 515732 (One-shot). It has potential, and I've got some feedback for you to improve it. The first chapter is a little all over the place and doesn't have much depth to it. Here's a question that helps me write the first chapter if there's a lot of information overload: "Out of everything I'm saying in this chapter, what, above all else, is the one thing I want to reveal?"
          
          For instance, how the chapter ends on the cliffhanger. You could open with that instead. Strip down the extra information and save it for later in the book. Focus on what you want to execute in the first chapter to draw your reader in and make the reader feel like they are in the room with Axel.
          
          All the best,
          Brave Angel

https://www.wattpad.com/story/381963379-texting-the-wrong-number
          
          
          
          I just wanted to share a story with you, it's a rom com and I’d really appreciate it if you could read it whenever you have a little time. Sorry if it’s any trouble—I know you’re busy, but it would mean a lot to me!
          
          Thanks so much! 
          

https://www.wattpad.com/story/370210823?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=carolinarosa300
          
          Hi, how are you? ❤ I invite you to read my book "Enchanted by him in the traffic jam". And if you like it, add it to your library! I also invite you to follow my book on Instagram: @enchantedbyhiminthetrafficjam

Hy can we chat? I can be of a help to you 

Hello I read your stories and maybe u could read mine

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Hello, I see you're new to Wattpad. Welcome! 
          
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          Have an awesome day!
          Crystal

Je t'invite à lire ma chronique "retour au passé", merci d'avance, si possible laisser un vote et t'abonner... Il te suffit de cliquer sur ma photo de profil