Havenoname

@JolynPalliata  I didn't mean to unfan you! I must have done it accidentally when I read your story on the iPhone. Everything is squished together on the screen that I hit things all the time! You're a fantastic writer!

Pujakumarisinha

"Let me teach you."  He held her hand from behind and aimed the gun towards the statue. Their almost whole body was touching this time and it looks like virat is hugging her from behind. A light sparked through her whole body and her heart started to pound on her chest very hard.
          
          "Just focus on your target..." she felt as if Virats voice is fanning her ear. She could even feel his breath on her neck. She tried to turn her head back and look at Virat, but he immediately turned her face forward.
          
          "Don't look at me, pay attention on your aim." Virat scolded her.
          
          'Huh? You are standing so close to me almost sticking on me, and expecting me to focus on the target?' Lucky grumbled in her mind. Her hands and feet were starting to get cold due to nervousness. Virat intertwined his fingers with her and pressed the trigger. One after another, Virat fired, and all the bullets hit the correct target this time.
          
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GythaLodge

Thank you so much for voting on The Fragile Tower!! :-) It's just the best to see a reader who's read it right through and enjoyed it enough to vote. Particularly as it means I get to come and say hello!
          
          Would you be able to be just AMAZING and vote on all the chapters?! It would make the biggest difference in keeping the book in the charts while I write book 2. 
          
          If you get the chance, I'd love it if you'd let me know so I can make sure I thank you properly in the acknowledgements in the book! :-) 
          
          Hope you'll enter the Cartheno's Fire competition too! It's so exciting now that it's less than 2 weeks away. 
          
          Gytha
          
          xxx

TheOrangutan

Hi, I just wanted to pop in and say thanks for fanning. 
          I’m not quite sure what I’ve done to deserve that, but it’s always grand to meet someone new. I hope you enjoy anything of mine you happen to read if you have five minutes spare and I’m always eternally grateful for any feedback in the form of comments or critique. 
          Please do feel free to comment, I really do enjoy hearing what people think.
          Cheers, Gav