CozyCado

I loved loved loved this book. The depth of the characters, the pacing, the plot, the suspense, the imagery. I could go on and on. It really is insanely good. The ending, however, felt very rushed. There was a whole lot going on in such little time, and we lost the perfect pacing, and the careful suspense buildup. Otherwise, it was fantastic. I’m actively hoping for a book two now!

Hay_Stace2008

@CozyCado Thank you so much for your feedback. I'll definitely keep it in mind when I'm writing. I really appreaciate you taking the time to comment and tell me what you think of the book.
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Bryanalor

This book is to die for. Litreally kept me at the edge of my seat. The buildup to the ending was superb but the ending itself wasn’t as apocalyptic as I hoped. I figured u might have told the way her power unleashed in a different way.

Hay_Stace2008

@Bryanalor Thank you so much for commenting! I hope the ending didn't dissappint too badly. I'm so glad you enjoyed the book tho!
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JasLinks

first book of 2026, and did I like it? I AM ABSOLUTELY OBSESSED and can't wait for the sequel... I haven't slept for three days since I opened TCOD, each and every character, their characteristics... THE PLOT TWIST, Bas's yearning... oh my soul just finished her, and this right here is the epitome of what fantasy and love was always meant to be my heart and soul has found their home, and it's all thanks to you Hay I can't wait for March to come around and knock me off of my feet... 3000 outta 3000, a complete masterpiece.

JasLinks

@Hay_Stace2008 i'm here for the ride☺️
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Hay_Stace2008

Thank you so much. Your words mean the world to me! It melts my heart when someone enjoys something I poured my soul into. And I definitely did with this book. I’m so so glad it resonated with you and I hope you’ll stick around until the end, because there are many more coming.
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WinterJerry

Helloooooo . It's me, your cheerleader, anywho I have a question. 
          How does Bastien's telekinesis work? Can he lift a human being  or even better a dragon !! If he can, I'd love to see, even if it's just a sentence, a footnote even, of him doing it! 
          I absolutely love your book, keep up the good work

WinterJerry

@QuinnJerry Yes!!
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Hay_Stace2008

Hi there! 
            I’m soo soo glad to hear you say that! You have no idea how much your comments mean to me! 
            
            So a persons powers and how strong it becomes is often up to them, whether they can handle it physically and emotionally. If I’m not mistaken I go into more depth in a later chapter. And don’t worry, you see more of Bastien using his power!
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