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Oh shit I did not notice this comment sorry about that I was up to the brim with college work, but if I am being honest man your story has been an amazing read and the Riley arc was really good and well thought out and had me in the edge on of my seat most of the time some from how into it I got and other times for a brief moment from some second hand cringe but other than that it was really good and some questions I had during the arcs where answered in the next couple of chapters,
However, I will confess that I did struggle to get in track because I got used to the large scale battles that where in the beginning of the story and would have liked to see more of the political and military build up from the Ausustroasians side namely with the Queen of High Tarax and the way they would be proceeding during and after the war against her brother and the continent
But in all honesty u cooking good