Hey there X3 I checked out your story and it seems great, it just needs some editing and a bit of tweaking here and there. I enjoy your writing style, which I can't say for many stories. I think you have potential as a writer if you work at it really hard! Idk, 136 reads is a lot in just the 24 days you have been on wattpad, so you are definitely going to great places someday. I wish you luck!
~MissKreepypasta