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I'm struggling on the next chapter of my book can anyoneee please help me out I'm so shit at writing people speaking in books (if that makes sense)✌

Made a tragic book based on the wonderful BTS members, main character is the alien himself KIM TAEHYUNG, read to find out what this tragic drama is about(please vote)❤️ 
          Oh and I recommend no younger than 14 read this its very violent and graphic thank you :)