@B_Luna Aww, shucks. I love youuuu! You don't know how uplifting that is to my inferiority complex. Thank you, thank you. See, I'm an English writer so I don't really have Filipino readers and I just posted that last mornight. It's actually my first time writing an uber Taglish story. The girl is on the conyo side, I hope I can pull it off without making her sound 'maarte'? (Now I sound like a conyo, hahaha!)
One of the Boys is not yet posted. I'll prolly post a few of HLS before posting for the main story. I know, I'm weird like that. But hey, you gotta love weird people, a'ight?
Really, thank you! I was thinking the POV was badly written or something, as well as the dialogues. Your input really helped! I'm glad you like Cari, really happpyyyyyyyy!